I Stand Redeemed

Hello, it’s 9.30 am on a Saturday and I am still cozing up in bed… Isn’t that what weekends are made for? 👧🙂

So this morning I intend to read some amazing work of my fellow bloggers on this platform… In the meantime, I just wanted to give you this poem I wrote about 9 or 10 years ago…

Let me know what you think 🤔 🙂🙏


Confusion compromised,
weighed and wedged;
into the heart,
like a broken piece of glass,
I could just feel
it bleed,
unparallel to the natural,
logic is dislodged,
truth is denied,
obvious is overlooked;
hidden selfish gains
in the name of love..
the criminal of normalcy,
the victim of tattered hope,
the victim of blind faith,
the wanderer,
that seeks light of him,
the light in every face,

Time the true,
time the forgiving,
time the adviser,
time truly is comforting,

Parallel to the bleeding,
Parallel I was healed,
Parallel to the sorrow,
Parallel I was redeemed,

Now that light is shining,
shining on me,
shining ever bright,
Yes clearly I can see

Life has been unjust
but time should be my way,
the unfocused,
was focused,
redeemed I am today.

Do leave a link to one of your own poems… I would love to read!

Have a lovely day everyone:) Happy weekend!


6 Comments Add yours

  1. Oh my goodness – this is beautiful. I really needed to read this and right at this very moment. Thank-you for sharing your beautiful and meaningful poetry.


    1. Awww thank you so much. I glad you liked it 💕

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Alien Poet says:

    this is so great and meaning and deep thoughts penned down.. i liked reading it..pleasure meeting you.. and ya..here is one of mine…


  3. Paulie says:

    Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.


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